Definitely not from alpha... I uploaded new ones here if want to take a look.
For a start you can write small texts just like you do it for whore job atm, but for actions between MC and girls from interactions. Kiss, hug, grab ass, grab boobs.
Not based on skills or stats, but based on the level of disposition. Ie for example from a small short kiss to deep one with tongue.
Yeah that's pretty much what I thought you meant. I'm looking at Chat.rpy from the master file now & other than 1 or 2 spelling errors, I wouldn't change a thing.
The existing conversation texts are perfectly fine from my perspective.
Some typos & grammar fixes: Chat.rpy
Line 536---- if co("Stright Prostitute"):
Should be
StraightLine 602 has 2 errors
"Manly": ["She gives you a lection how to build your muscles properly. You feel a bit offended, but keep your cool.", "She casually remarks that you should exercise more often, and gives you some advices."],
Lection =
lecture on //// advices at the end should just be
adviceLine 604 (very end)-------- You envy."],
Should be You envy
herLine 607 ---- You comforting her."],
should be
You try to comfort her.Line 609 ------ how hard to find adult clothes
should be ----- how hard
it is to find adult clothes
Also, I noticed the one school of magic, "electricity" If we're dealing with a pre-industrial civilization, isn't it more in keeping with lore to make it lightning?
Line 318 ---- $gm_abouther_list.append(choice(["I'm pretty good with electricity magic."]))
even sounds better if you change electricity to lightening.
If you want me to make the changes myself, I'd rather not work on any of the master files.
I've just been DLing the master ZIP & checking it out in renpy or Editra to be more specific.
I didn't bother getting GIT since I'm clueless and paranoid I'll fuck something up.
[edit] found another, line 334:
have to wait me."]))
should be ---- have to wait
for me
Line 383:
travellers
should be
travelers Line 389:
don't you thing?
should be ---- don't you
think?