HI,
First off I like this games, and I support your work, however there are a few things I would like to suggest which in my mind might improve it.
1. Have pictures to match any action taken. IE if your receiving a Blowjob, have a picture of a blow job appear from that girl. Forced or otherwise. The same goes for all the others: Rape, deep-throat etc. Having a corralled picture to an action would help Emerse the player. In addition, having a picture for torture to including the girls sobbing etc would also be good
2. Have some sort of time limit to the game, after x number of mouth the game ends with a review. Depending on the how youve done, the player gets an ending - good, bad etc
3. I found the items confusing and time consuming to control. I would suggest reducing the list of available items. And also make it easy to purchase items for multiple girls at once.
4. Having images for the "customer" events would be good.
5. during the summery reviews, display pictures of the girls having sex, be it BDSM, blows job ass fuck or even rape etc. I felt that the pictures being displayed were random.
6. I liked the gang warfare part of the game, but I think it should have a better reward than just new brothels. For example each brothel owner has a named leader with a gang and girls. I would enjoy being able to kidnap his whore and or attach them, instead of a generic gang.
8. Introducing the police/politicking in the game might be interesting, instead of just fighting the police / council members you can bribe with with girls and or run for office yourself. This could open up a strategy of city wide control
7. Having more variation to the descriptions to each sexual act would be good too, after a while it become a tad dull reading the same description over and over
8. I didnt really make make much use of the catacombs in the game as I didnt see the point. Having some additional reason for going down there may help - IE raise a tentacle army, enslave all human girls, destroy the evil succubus ...
9. All in all, for a beta version the basics are there, I just think some sort of story and objective is required to make this game more complete.
10. Great effort thus far, and I look forward to your further developments.