I went through the CoreTraits.traitsx file and made a few modifications. Some of them are simple things like adding punctuation, decapitalizing letters, or other simple grammar fixes; others are more subjective, in some cases rewriting parts of (or entire) trait descriptions (although I did take a stab at making some breast size traits more obvious - there's a discussion on that front from earlier this year).
Not sure if it's of use to anyone, but if they want to give it a look I don't think I broke anything. I did do this while buzzed and half-asleep, though, so don't take my word for it.
To end on a pedantic note: the grammar snob in me really wants the Farmers Daughter trait to be renamed to Farmer's Daughter, although I don't know how much that would break things.