Ok looked over the game a bit:
Is it really necessary to have the "She received %d Gold as payment and has split it with you (you get %d %%)." in every if clause of the whore job?
Besides that I went through a lot of the whoring and fixed some typos and tried making some of the sentences flow better. I still have to go through acts other than straight sex before I am done (I would like to have different sentences for the different acts), but I am pretty tired already so I will have to do that later.
I also changed the text of the training menu a bit.
Also made some changes to the UI in the girl profile screen again since I had some small formatting issues.
The alternating text colors in the stats part are supposed to make the data easier to read - not sure if I like how it turned out though.
I personally like the centered name and new placement of location, class and action though.
(on the matter of this screen: wouldn't it make sense to hide info that hasn't anything to do with her class? (There still should be a button there to show the info))
I think I found a bug too: A slave (TenTen) I used as service worker always has two entries in the next day screen. I haven't tried reproducing this yet with another girl but have dropped the savegame into my folder anyway if you want to have a look.
What we need are:
I am sadly not familiar enough with any of these to be of any help, sorry.
Distantly related to this I would like to ask how many girls we have that are service workers.
Also another thing I noticed is that some of the girls you can meet in the city right now are slaves - something that we should change I think.