Crazy's mod writing help

[crazy]

Asked about this a few times but I think it keeps getting lost in posts so Im starting a new topic just for this.  Ill be updating this with what Im looking for as it goes along.  If you write anything you can post it here or PM it to me either one.  1st thing Im looking to get more of is sex string for when girls have types of sex.  1st up BDSM here is what we have

if BDSM less then 40
girlName was frightened by being tied up and having pain inflicted on her
less then 60
was a little turned on by being tied up and having the customer hurting her
less then 80
was highly aroused by the pain and bondage, even more so when fucking at the same time
Once its above 80 its starts into something more.  But 3 variations is to low for me so if you can come up with some to add send them to me.


If I actually get some help here I will change these out with different ones as it goes along.

[crazy]

Lesbian this time only 4 once they get past 80 it goes to a different way of doing it.  More would be great

less then 20 girlName licked her female customer's cunt until she came. She didn't want any herself
less then 40 girlName  was aroused as she made her female customer cum
less then 60 girlName  fucked and was fucked by her female customer
less then 80 girlName  and her female customer's cumming could be heard thoughout the building

[crazy]

Group this time.  Same as before after they pass 80 skill it changes.  But again 4 is just to low I feel

less then 20    girlName struggled to service everyone in the group that came to fuck her
less then 40    girlName managed to keep the group of customers fucking her satisfied
less then 60    girlName serviced all of the group of customers that fucked her
less then 80   girlName fucked and came many times with everyone in the group of customers

[crazy]

res 3 was probably enough but better safe then sorry lol 

[GonDra]

Lesbian
<20:
 girlName mechanically worked the customers pussy, barely managing to satisfy her.
 girlName managed to make the female customer cum, but seemed distressed about where she was touched by a fellow woman.

<40:
 girlName enjoyed herself a little bit as her hands and tongue made her customer cum.
 girlName didn't seem to mind her customers hands drifting over her body as she brought her to orgasm.
 girlName was a bit uncomfortable with herself being visibly aroused after servicing her customer.
 
<60:
 girlName and her customer both came as they rubbed their bodies against each other.
 Both of their faces had a satisfied look to them when girlName and her customer were done.

<80:
 girlName seemingly had a blast with her customer as both their moans were quite audible.
 girlName managed to make her partner shriek loudly several times as she tickled multiple orgasms out of her customer.


Group
<20:
 girlName was overwhelmed by the group surrounding her, barely able to react to what was done to her.
 girlName was being used by the group more so than her actively servicing them.
 
<40:
 girlName barely was able to service everyone, but managed to entertain her customers nonetheless.

<60:
 girlName managed to surprise a few of her customers as she pleasured more of them at the same time than they had thought possible.

<80:
 girlName was praised for her enthusiastic multitasking, which left everyone satisfied and a bit exhausted.


That is all I can dredge from my brain right now, probably could use some proof reading.
Also not sure how well the texts with 'girlName' not at the start work so I would like some feedback on that and on the texts themselves.

P.S.: I now remember why I didn't try my hand at this earlier: having to write in a very general manner, since I can't be sure with which pictures they are displayed, is very different to how I usually write.

[crazy]

Also not sure how well the texts with 'girlName' not at the start work so I would like some feedback on that and on the texts themselves.

They are fine to have a girlName in the middle.

I would like some feedback on that and on the texts themselves.

I like them this is what Im looking for.  Im not great at feedback like this.  Other then saying I like them and they are in game and will be in the next patch.

P.S.: I now remember why I didn't try my hand at this earlier: having to write in a very general manner, since I can't be sure with which pictures they are displayed, is very different to how I usually write.

Displaying a certain picture is something that we can work on doing.  Joey was talking about rewriting the image code and sounded like something like this is something hes looking at doing.  So write it and say what kinda pick you want and we can work on adding it at a later point.

[dmotrl]

Idle thoughts (don't have enough time right now to actually write some) ...

* BDSM could have some where the girl is the Dominant; maybe have the less-experienced variations not hit hard enough (or, if Sadistic, hit too hard.)

* Group could have all-girl variations, all-male variations, and mixed.

* If someone wants to go the extra mile, strings for specific traits could be done - I'm fairly sure Masochist has been done for BDSM, but a lot of traits could have similar ones, like the Breast traits for Titty sex.

[crazy]

* BDSM could have some where the girl is the Dominant; maybe have the less-experienced variations not hit hard enough (or, if Sadistic, hit too hard.)

Could be done.  Thought about doing something like this before so yeah if someone writes them Ill do my best to get it in game.

* Group could have all-girl variations, all-male variations, and mixed.

Again could be done but would be harder I would think to do.  If someone writes them Ill look at trying to add them.

* If someone wants to go the extra mile, strings for specific traits could be done - I'm fairly sure Masochist has been done for BDSM, but a lot of traits could have similar ones, like the Breast traits for Titty sex.

Yeah I would really like some trait based string for this.  We have a few for some of the sex types but not many so would be nice to have some for every type.

[GonDra]

Oral:
<80
 girlName kept caressing the customers cock and balls making him cum again and again until he was dry.
 [Deepthroat/no gag reflex] Ramming the customers hard cock down her own throat, girlName worked on it with all her skill.

Anal:
<80
 [tight ass] Just as the customer wondered if he would fit into the tight ass in front of him, girlName spread her ass for him, inviting him to push it deep into her.
 [each of the big ass traits would apply here] Encouraged by girlName the customer plowed her ass hard, enjoying the sound her jiggling backside made each time he drove his cock home.

normal Sex:
<40
 [plump] The constant prodding and groping of her embarrassingly plump body made it hard for girlName to concentrate on being a good fuck.

group:
<40
 [plump] girlName's jiggling body seems to invite the cocks around her to prod her everywhere as she struggles to satisfy the demand of the group.


If you guys have ideas regarding which traits you want to see with a specific job I am open to suggestions, even if I can not guarantee that I will manage to write something.

[crazy]

If you guys have ideas regarding which traits you want to see with a specific job I am open to suggestions, even if I can not guarantee that I will manage to write something.

Thanks for the extra strings I will get them added as soon as i can.  If I think of any traits to work on Ill let you know.  Again thanks and sorry for late replay been slammed at work.

[GonDra]

Thanks for the extra strings I will get them added as soon as i can.  If I think of any traits to work on Ill let you know.  Again thanks and sorry for late replay been slammed at work.

No problem.
If you want I can try my hand at implementing the lines myself, since I should be able to work out how to do that from how you implemented the previous ones. Most likely I will have time for that in ~3 days though.

[crazy]

No problem.
If you want I can try my hand at implementing the lines myself, since I should be able to work out how to do that from how you implemented the previous ones. Most likely I will have time for that in ~3 days though.

I have most of them in already.  Think I only didn't add two of them and I will get to adding them soon so dont worry about it.  Thanks for the offer

[Sorren]

Going to sound like an asshat but those read really flatly.... Personally I'd go more along the lines of making the girl be in the moment rather than objectified as they are at the moment and cover how you even see the event.

For instance:
Lesbian <20: girlName looked confused at having to service a female customer, her hands trembled as she struggled to entice any reaction from her partner. Shaking your head you leave them to it and hope she doesn't turn the customer off so much you make no money.
(When sexuality is added more variants will be needed, for instance a natural lesbian will be enthusiastic whereas the above would apply more to a heterosexual woman)

(stray thought)
Lesbian <20 Has Doctor/Medicine >40: girlName looked confused at having to service a female customer, fortunately her medical training made her seem more competent than she actually is. Her touch steady, if a little medical, and able to entice the odd reaction from her partner. Thankful for that mixed blessing you leave the pair of them to it.

Lesbian <40: girlName has definitely started to enjoy herself, her touch is more natural and she's begun to use her tongue and lips to pleasure her female customers. Nodding with approval you leave the room as the customer's hands start to caress girlName's back causing her to start slightly, although she doesn't shy away from the contact.

This is kind of how I'd go about it personally, otherwise it sounds to clinical rather than generic. Again this is just me though so feel free to disagree.

[crazy]

Going to sound like an asshat but those read really flatly.... Personally I'd go more along the lines of making the girl be in the moment rather than objectified as they are at the moment and cover how you even see the event.

Anything is better then whats in game right now.  What you wrote is good.  Really like the trait and medicine one.  Write more and Ill gladly add them but biggest problem is ones in game kinda suck so I need more.  Would love to have so many text strings that you rarely see the same one more then every few turns.  But I suck at writing so gotta find help for it and what GonDra wrote is so much better then whats in game it don't matter at the moment.  I would replace most of the one in game if someone would write enough text strings for it that are good.  But as Im sick of seeing the same ones over and over I gotta find help for it.

[hewhocumsbynight]

So, I have an idea about the "fame" stat, and some flavor text that should appear for characters with Actress, Director, Singer, or Porn Star professions or the Queen or Idol social traits.  Namely, I like the idea that, as their fame increases, certain events can trigger fanboy text.  I don't know if this possible, but I think that it'd be cool if at a certain level of fame, a certain number of interactions spawn fanboy text.  These texts would be relative to the specific trait assigned to the girl, and could also be tied to certain levels of skill.

Actress:

-Fame < 20:  GirlName's customer was amazed to find his favorite (indie/rookie) actress working at your brothel. 
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is < 20 (if Girlname has trait "virgin", "I can't believe I get to take Girlname's virginity!  I'll never be able to see you on screen again without remembering this!") then "I can't believe how bad you are at (sex, anal, titty, etc) fucking you are, GirlName!  If you want to go far on screen, you gotta do better!"
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is > 20 but < 50, then "Hey, Girlname, you're pretty good at (sex, anal, titty,etc)!  I'll have to go tell my friends about you - this is way better than seeing you on stage!"
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is > 50 but < 90, then "Damn, it's a good thing somebody brought you here, Girlname!  You're way better in the sack than you were on stage!"
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is > 90 but < 100, then "The fact that you wasted any time with your stupid acting career is a tragedy - you're a born slut!" (potentially keying to event where "slut" trait is added)
-Fame < 50, > 20:  GirlName has a special customer - one of her biggest fans!  All B-listers have some.
        -If currentjob="w", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is < 20, (same virginity text) then "Huh, you might've done better if you'd stayed on the stage and just teased, Girlname.  You're kinda disappointing in person."
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is > 20 but < 50, then "Hey, not bad, Girlname!  You're pretty good on the big screen, but your (mouth, pussy, ass, etc) feels so good!"
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is > 50 but < 90, then "Oh, Girlname, you're pretty good when performing, but you're way better at worshiping my (dick, cunt, beast)!"
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is >90 but < 100, then "Gods damn!  You're so good at (sex, anal sex, titty sex, etc) that I can barely remember you for anything else!"
-Fame < 90, >50:  GirlName's devoted fanbase swells in number daily, bringing you plenty of customers whenever she's on deck.
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is < 20, (same virginity text) then "Holy shit!  I can't believe that I'm breaking Girlname's (cunt, ass, mouth, etc) in!  This is one of my fondest fantasies!"
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is > 20 but < 50, then "I can't believe that such a famous bitch as Girlname is climbing all over my (dick, cunt, beast, etc)!  This is a performance sure to get glowing reviews!"
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is > 50 but < 90, then "Just imagine *oof* the royalties, Girlname!  Imagine the profits from seeing *aah!* famous actress Girlname whore herself on live tv!"
        -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for current job (sex, anal, titty, etc) is > 90, then "I'd love you see to do that again Girlname, in front of a live studio audience!"

Singer:

-Fame < 20:  While originally a singer, you've put GirlName to work playing a different instrument.
         -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for oral is < 20, then "Goddammit, you should go back to singing.  Maybe then you'd have some idea of how to use your tongue correctly!"
         -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for oral is < 50 but > 20, then "Huh, I guess that those music night classes were good for something after all, huh Girlname?" (possible event:  Lose 5 dignity)
         -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for oral is < 90 but > 50, then "Damn, Girlname!  Feel that tongue move!  I might have to make my wife take night music classes at the college!" (possible vent: Gain trait 'nimble tongue')
-Fame  < 50, > 20:  Girlname's pretty good at singing, but you've thought of a better use for her.
         -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for oral is < 20, then "You should stick to singing, Girlname-chan."
         -If currentjob="whore", "whore in streets", "bar whore", or "hall whore" and the skill level for oral is < 50 but > 20, then "Hey, I came for your singing, but I think I like you better down on your knees."