| (http://img.rule34.xxx/rule34//images/907/c5f2d86811010c2a6bf999303e0b83cc588a1276.jpg?907035) | Juri Han : -~=REMAKING=~- will probably abandon. |
| (http://tbib.org//images/1125/2676580f4e0c09c95fa79c3ffba4cc5c21017a91.jpg?1124075) | Moonlight Flower V1.4: Anal - 1 BDSM - 3 Combat - 3 Death - 2 Ecchi - 4 Group - 1 Lesbian- 1 Mast - 2 Oral - 3 Profile- 10 Sex - 3 |
A little feedback:
Images:
The images as a whole are pretty good. You're obviously preferring quality pics where they are available, but in some categories you just have to settle. Combat2 is the only image that I'd outright discard. If you're still looking to improve the pack gelbooru.com has a few good quality pics that aren't in your 1.2 version. Just do a search for moonlight_flower.
.girlsx file
Like you said she is crazy overpowered. She has 100% looks and 100% magic and 60% combat right from the start. That is somewhat balanced by the fact that with 0 obedience, 100 spirit, Iron Will, Aggressive and Fearless she likely to be almost permanently 50 rebelliousness (30 if you brand her as a slave). The only way I see a player getting any sort of consistent performance out of this girl would be after a lengthy stay in the dungeon where she was tortured until her Iron Will broke. If I remember correctly there are a few items with the same effect.
There are also a few typos on the description. I made a few edits, and did some word smithing. Use it if you want.
A Demon fox that takes on the appearance of a young human female. It is known to gain control of things by using the bell that it always carries. These foxes are also great leaders with strong magic and agile bodies.
wow thanks! dident expect my first review to be that good. i played around last night and you are right it is hard to get her to listen, after a few weeks in the dungeon against my EPIC torturer she was obeying like a robot. i will be lowering the max stats a little ( i forgot to take into account that the traits give stats) to around 70.
galbooru huh? ill take a gander tonight, thanks.
i like the new description, my only issue is she is a 1 of a kind and the description dosen't exactly fit that. but i will use it anyway thanks!
but i guess google is always your best friend in the end ;D
what do you guys think of my de-censor?
what do you guys think of my de-censor?
Great job! Did you use a guide or simply know your way around photoshop/gimp? If guide than which guide?
Not sure off hand, but as I recall the Slavemaker forums over on FP have a guide on decensoring. I'll see if I can't dig the link up after work tonight.
Aha. Here it is. http://www.futanaripalace.com/showthread.php?40446-I-Am-Talentless-Decensorer-%28And-So-Can-You!%29&highlight=decensor (http://www.futanaripalace.com/showthread.php?40446-I-Am-Talentless-Decensorer-%28And-So-Can-You%21%29&highlight=decensor)
Aha. Here it is. http://www.futanaripalace.com/showthread.php?40446-I-Am-Talentless-Decensorer-%28And-So-Can-You!%29&highlight=decensor (http://www.futanaripalace.com/showthread.php?40446-I-Am-Talentless-Decensorer-%28And-So-Can-You%21%29&highlight=decensor)
well fuck... turns out juri han was already done by lurker... why did nobody tell me??? :'(
Noone prolly knew :) Do a search next time. And that was for Ex or normal WM. There are many girls that were done by several modders.
making 2 random girls, slime girl and dragon girl.
anyone know how i came hide information? like a spoiler box?
wow thanks! ...whats the password? :-[
Might I suggest you just do all the girls from one series? You've already started Street Fighter with Juri - why not keep up the SF theme?
Or, you could just rebuild your pack from the ground up. I've had to do that several times for several packs.