A little feedback:
Images:
The images as a whole are pretty good. You're obviously preferring quality pics where they are available, but in some categories you just have to settle. Combat2 is the only image that I'd outright discard. If you're still looking to improve the pack gelbooru.com has a few good quality pics that aren't in your 1.2 version. Just do a search for moonlight_flower.
.girlsx file
Like you said she is crazy overpowered. She has 100% looks and 100% magic and 60% combat right from the start. That is somewhat balanced by the fact that with 0 obedience, 100 spirit, Iron Will, Aggressive and Fearless she likely to be almost permanently 50 rebelliousness (30 if you brand her as a slave). The only way I see a player getting any sort of consistent performance out of this girl would be after a lengthy stay in the dungeon where she was tortured until her Iron Will broke. If I remember correctly there are a few items with the same effect.
There are also a few typos on the description. I made a few edits, and did some word smithing. Use it if you want.
A Demon fox that takes on the appearance of a young human female. It is known to gain control of things by using the bell that it always carries. These foxes are also great leaders with strong magic and agile bodies.
