Skimmed through the pages in this thread, checked out some of the traits some people made.
Here is a list of traits with fixed & cleaned descriptions / etc I made, it's not in proper format so I apologize in advance for that. (Also alphabeticalized)
Some traits were combined as they were simply duplicates of each other but worded slightly different.
Also cleaned / made some descriptions more pleasant to read as some of the old ones were simply a turn off.
Some of my opinions, forgive me if I sound overbearing;
Some traits should be simplified to one rather then spread out into many, which only makes more work.
I think job traits should be limited to well known fetishes (maid, cop, nurse) as there are simply way too much jobs to list if you were to seriously list all of them.
The same goes for monsters, while only popular ones should be listed (elves, succubus etc), everything else categorized as the common 'monster'.
Construct already sums up anything 'robotic / battery / etc'.
Werebeasts sums up all fox, dog, cat ear girls, demi-human sums up all part human girls.
Angel sums up pretty much all heavenly beings, no need for seraphim / goddess / etc.
Same goes for Demon, sums up everything in that category as well.
And in my opinion, I don't think any of the 'Gag Reflex' traits are a good idea at all.
I think it would be too hard to determine whether one girl has a gag reflex over another.
And for WM, having a gag reflex shouldn't even be allowed for all that can be said.
If it exists, it would mean a possibility of having a 'cannot do anal' 'cannot do vaginal' trait, which kind of kills the point of having that girl pack.
On this list I simplified a few others, like piercings on certain body parts, so it leaves the reader imagining where the piercing is rather then plainly telling them outright where.
As some would find clit piercings or nipple piercings a turn off. The same can be said about missing body parts, I'd rather not know / read that a girl is missing a nipple or finger.
While there is probably some who would find that a turn on, I for one think it's a major turn off.
And to those who find it a turn on, I think leaving it to their imagination or either their existing knowledge of those girls they have, is a better idea.
Suggest only keeping traits that have some relevance to the game play as well as the girl packs rather then emphasizing on just one.
I understand that at the moment all girlpacks and items use the more or less the current 'common' trait list but I personally believe those are pretty easy to fix.
Worth revamping all traits if it's for the sake of higher quality game play. Because at the moment, many of them are either a turn off or either not worth having as a trait.
Also made cleaned the descriptions so players would have to use common sense rather then being told 'you should remove this trait soon or else something something happens'.
Whether some traits has a detrimental effect or positive effect, the player should use their own head and figure it out on their own.
Some traits corrected like 'Out-Patient Surgery' should instead simply be 'patient'.
As out-patient means a patient who receives medical treatment without being admitted to a hospital.
And in-patient means a patient who is admitted into a hospital.
While a patient just means someone received / receiving medical care / treatment.
If this list is any useful at all or if the descriptions is to your taste, please respond with any ones that I missed and I'll do those too!
And once again I apologize about it not being in proper format, I just can't seem to get my brain working whenever I see stuff like '<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>" etc.
