Made a list of grammatical errors in Week Summary. I would've corrected them myself and sent a pull request if I weren't so afraid of fucking something up when using github.
Anger Management (I think several jobs in the center have the same typo)
Asuka Langley SoryuShe fought with her counselor and did not make any progress this week.
Asuka Langley Soryu fought with her counselor and did not make any progress this week.
Personal trainingWanting her for yourself,
You decide to teach her how to ride a dick like a pro.
Wanting her for yourself, you decide to teach her how to ride a dick like a pro.
Strip Club StripperSold a few lap
dance.
Sold a few lap dances. or << girlName << sold a few lap dances.
Brothel Stripperwas able to sell a lap dance
.In one of the private shows, she ended up fucking the customer as well, making him very happy.
<< girlName << was able to sell a lap dance. In one of the private shows, she ended up fucking the customer as well, making him very happy.
Peep ShowSuguha Kirigaya
swinging her boobs and ass in a very sexual way.
Suguha Kirigaya is swinging her boobs and ass in a very sexual way.
Strip Club WaitressShe must be the perfect waitress
customers go on and on about her and always come to see her when she works.
She must be the perfect waitress, as customers go on and on about her and always come to see her when she works.
House Pet- Today she was a bad girl! Bad.Otherwise, the shift passed uneventfully.
Today she was a bad girl! Bad. Otherwise, the shift passed uneventfully. - You clip a leash to Argentina’s collar and she barks uneasily. She knows she’s just your pet bitch, but she remembers when she wasn’t. She hasn’t quite embraced this life yet.
[This paragraph comes up twice in a row. It happened in the text "…the head girl happened by as you spent an afternoon working out a new business strategy…", but not in the others that I saw. Haven't checked all options.] - << headname << comes out as “the Head girl”. Should be “The Head Girl” I think?
- The texts for House Pet has a lot of typos and incorrect verb tenses, but I don’t trust myself to edit correctly in C++, nor do I think people bother enough for it to matter.
Gangs - Double spaces after “Gang” and again after gang name. E.g. “Gang Unsightly Mavericks is guarding.” I haven't checked all jobs, but it seems to count for several.
- You have completed your objective to Gain control 3 new businesses.
You get a Incense of Serenity (L),
You have completed your objective to “Gain control 3 new businesses”.
You receive an item called "Incense of Serenity (L)".
Concerning the last bullet point, there was a misplaced comma at the end but also a suggestion for quotation marks around the completed job and received item.