Yup, that looks promising. Though water seems a bit unnatural along the shore, but maybe it's just me.
What
ideally should have a global map:
* Various types of terrain, as many as possible. The city is standing on the river (we even have a beach), and we already have a forest. Plains, mountains, wastelands, volcanoes, some roads like on this map would be useful too.
* Probably no objects, like cities, caves and so on. Maybe except the main city, where our events take place. We will add additional objects on the map, but they should be hidden at first.
* If Xela and Cherry have any requests for a global map, it's a good time to mention them