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Offline bj

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typos
« on: November 13, 2010, 12:28:48 PM »
A few of the message typos were bugging me, so I trolled through the .exe in a hex editor and found all the typos I could:
paitence -> patience
adiciton -> addiction
haning -> hanging
Aquire -> Acquire
uncomfotable ->uncomfortable
saftey -> safety
definently -> defiantly
wih -> with
nintey -> ninety
harrased -> harrassed
perpitrator -> perpetrator
implimented -> implemented
tougues -> tongues
discrete -> discreet
frolicing -> frolicking
unconsious -> unconscious
comitting -> committing
smithery -> smithy
trafficing -> trafficking
collapsable -> collapsible
slavegirl -> slave girl
efficent -> efficient
duellist -> duelist
womens' -> women's
weilding -> wielding
apartThis-> apart. This
permises -> premises

grammar:
grown of age - "Her son has grown of age and <has been> sold into slavery", "Her daughter has grown of age and <has been> placed in your dungeon"

beginning of turn activity descriptions - concatenation of name and action description often doesn't make sense, should either use the girl's name +" 's", or use "her".  Often it ends up as "<name> her shrieks..."

Just little nitpicks - good work overall!

Offline DocClox

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Re: typos
« Reply #1 on: November 14, 2010, 03:10:11 AM »
Wow. Thanks for that. After a while you just start seeing strings as strings, and stop reading the words inside of them, so it's always useful to have help tracking down the typos.